Violet-Foxes

Victor Dredg As requested by SkinnyGreenKiller (https://www.deviantart.com/skinnygreenkiller), I'm going to critique their character, Victor.   Name- Victor Dredg Age- 19 Gender- Male Species- Victoreon/Jumper (MIX) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *Let me just say I really like the name Victor, it gives me a sense of sophistication. The age is reasonable, but I would like to know more about his species. Basically, you've caught my interest.*   ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ BIO- Victor was born and raised in a breeding facility; at age 15 he finally escaped. After traveling fo

As requested by BeesArtTrash (https://www.deviantart.com/beesarttrash), I will be critiquing her OC, Akira-San. Now I don't normally critique (Or want anything to do with) MLP stuff, but UndertaleGurlMLP was just too polite to refuse. So, here you go, I hope this helps a bit, and I apologize in advance if I come off as harsh. +|OC|+Akira-San|+ Here is the link. Considering there is no backstory (shame), I'll just have to go off of the looks, so this critique may be somewhat short. I'm gonna come out and say it: She's really fucking edgy. No offense, but this looks almost like a Mary Sue. She's not like other girls (or should I say ponies). She's unique! Moving on from t